In the grand scheme of things you get a B+ for effort. Where you lost us was in the facts. As people say, details make or break the argument.. And it could not be more true in this article. Having said that, let me say to you just what did deliver the results. Your text is pretty powerful and that is probably why I am taking the effort to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Next, while I can see the jumps in logic you make, I am not necessarily confident of how you seem to connect the points which in turn make the conclusion. For now I shall subscribe to your point but hope in the future you connect the dots better.